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No One Like Me
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:33:43 PM in AEST
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It's sad to see this happen,
Especially since I've wanted to do that for so long,
Everyone's thoughts pound in my head,
And I wonder why'd it get to her,
She's only a child,
A 13 year old girl,
Ending her life,
Thinking it would help everyone,
I been there before,
But,
Unlike her I had help,
I was reminded of the one's who I love,
The one's who would be hurt by me going,
Yes I will admit it's hard growing up,
Face the challenges,
That life will throw in your path,
It's worth it trust me,
I know the rude comments,
I know the remarks,
And I know your wishes to end it all,
It will get better,
All in the end,
I just hope that I get to you,
Before this poem ends,
I know you feel worthless,
But believe me your not,
Just stand up straight,
Don't look away,
And you'll make it to the end,
One more thing before you go,
And repeat it in your mind,
There is no one like me.
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2004-11-25 16:33:43]
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Re: No One Like Me
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:40:52 PM AEST
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WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM.IT SHOWS MORE THEN STAYING ALIVE IT SHOWS THAT WE'RE DIFFERENT WHEN U SAID "There is no one like me".YES WE'RE ALL DIFFERENT BUT WE'RE ALL THE SAME!GREAT POEM,I REALLY LIKED THIS
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!
SAVEDBYDEATH
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Re: No One Like Me
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by Jen54 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:48:16 PM AEST
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That was such a beautyful poem.
I also was at a point when I wanted to end my life. People close to me showed me that things will get better.
I loved your poem sooo much.
Keep up the great writing.
-Jen |
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Re: No One Like Me
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:41:16 PM AEST
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| great write. been there before but not anymore, or at least not at this moment. truely inspiring. keep it up =] |
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Re: No One Like Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:01:58 PM AEST
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Great poem with such a positive message. I been there before too.
I wish more people would read this poem to get its message. |
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Re: No One Like Me
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:27:49 AM AEST
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| great poem!!! ive told yew so much or chris and yewhave told me of corey but i was wondering if yew want to yew can read mi poem called dont give up. i wrote another poem bout chris too called The only chance, thanks for everything, i have been in a few experiences miself with suicide, and i had people that stopped me, if it wasnt for them i wouldve never realised how much i mean in this world, or anyone else means, the deaf route is no fun what-so-ever great write keep wriiting ~Chrissy~ |
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