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That October Day
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:33:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I have nothing left- Nothing to give...
Since I don't have you- Why Should I live...
The words you say-Conflict with the beat....
I look at your blue eyes- so warm so sweet
I'm Sorry my feelings for you have changed
Is what you said....
I feel so alone so lost-
I feel like I'm dead...
When you told me you liked me-
All the glory rose to my heart...
Yes, you were right- you tore me apart...
I told you I hated you-
But deep down In my heart I don't
I can't feel your heart- If It just Won't
I told you I didn't like you...
But what I told you was a lie...
I can't tell you how I feel- you made me cry
Why does it hurt so much?
You Hurt me I want you so bad...
But you took my love for granted...
Shattered my heart and made me sad...
I wish you would know how I feel
I wish, you would come back
I would make it right- I would make it real
I just want to grab you and make you see...
Just how much I need you here with me...
I still remember that October day-
When you left my world,
And you took my heart away...
I still remember when you kissed my lips-
When I pretended to be asleep-
My love for you is so strong so deep...
You took my hand, and held it tight
I wanted it to last- but it ended that night
I miss you talking to me-
I miss your smile- and all our flirting...
You hurt me so much- Now I'm Still hurting..
My heart was broken-
By the squeeze of your soft hand...
My heart is buried- deep down in the sand...
I look at you- across the room
My heart is shedding its pedals-
On top of love's tomb...
When you broke up with me-
You Had no explanation-
You were the love of my life-
I wanted to take you to my destination...
You said you were sorry- But how could you?
With one last kiss- You left me too...
With one last touch- We were through...
Now I can't tell you my dreams or my life
Since you took my heart away from me,
And stabbed it with a knife.
Don't you see how much you made me cry?
All Because, You said Goodbye
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2004-11-25 17:33:51]
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Re: That October Day
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by MoreThanNormal on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:08:24 PM AEST
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| I really like this one, the feelings are so true. I know how it feels to be left like that. Keep writing, very good work! |
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Re: That October Day
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:37:15 PM AEST
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Really sad.... but so well written.
Great show of emotions..
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Re: That October Day
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by mia on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:08:42 AM AEST
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This is really well written, shows feeling!!!
Hugs
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