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Love's Despair
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:44:42 PM in AEST
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Ive never felt as broken
As I do right now
You broke me in so many places
I just dont know how
My heart is shattered like broken glass
My soul is broken beyond repair
My mind is filled with insanity
Im lost in loves despair
Please just take my life away
Theres nothing left to break
Everything inside is already dead
And my outside is so fake
My lying smile tells it all
I laugh when I want to cry
I hold back all the tears
Then I feel like I want to die
But I wont let you know that
I dont want you to see my pain
I would rather you be happy
Because towards myself theres much disdain
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2004-11-25 22:44:42]
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Re: Love's Despair
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:13:46 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write. |
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Re: Love's Despair
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:15:44 PM AEST
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Sad but written like a pro.
Hope things get better really soon.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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Re: Love's Despair
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:43:17 PM AEST
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this is such a beautiful and powerful and so truthful write.. its one of the best poems on heartache that i have seen .. you can feel this and anyone that went through this themselves can relate and feel your pain too.. awesome JOB i give you 5 stars
Peace and hope
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Re: Love's Despair
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:46:17 AM AEST
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Aww this is such a powerfull sad write, i really enjoyed reading your poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Love's Despair
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:23:59 AM AEST
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so veyr sad, emotional but written with beauty, an amazing poem,
pixie xx |
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