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All I Ever Wanted
Contributed by
always
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:27:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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So....So....So why do we try? Why do we go on....? When it seems that all is gone. When it seems there is nothing left to do but cry. All the dreams are gone. All the hopes have drowned........ And evil has been crowned.
All I ever wanted......was to battle the wrong. All I ever needed.....was to right the wrongs....... And even now...I can not admit the chance is gone. The chance to lift up a man..... The chance to bring the water..... The chance to do all that I can...... The chance to be that one......to hold the ladder....
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Re: All I Ever Wanted
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:41:50 PM AEST (User
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nice write.. i like how it started off sad then ended like with a piece of hope
Peace and hope
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Re: All I Ever Wanted
(User Rating: 1 ) by namesaretaken on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:26:49 PM AEST (User
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Good stuff I really liked this one espeically the lines
All the dreams are gone.
All the hopes have drowned........
And evil has been crowned
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