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Crawl to Bed
Contributed by
SushiQ
on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:48:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tears flood my eyes once more today
No longer are my eyes dry
And my heart full of hope
I feel discouraged
Back to where I was
My heart is now pounding
It knocks so loud on my chest
I think it wants to fall out
Or maybe it's contracting
Squeezing out the venom of despair
I feel hurt and confined
by the prison cell that I created
Trapped behind these four walls
That bind me and blind me
I dont want to return here
But my fear traps me in
The venom runs though my veins
And makes my body shiver
I lock myself in and I hide
From the world
Copyright ©
SushiQ
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2004-11-26 00:48:48]
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Re: Crawl to Bed
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:29:12 AM AEST
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This was actually very good...very well written
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Re: Crawl to Bed
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by girish on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 03:14:37 AM AEST
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dear friend, this is just a lack of self confidence. read my poems each poem will tell you a different subject to emerge from such a situation.
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Re: Crawl to Bed
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by THORN on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:56:53 AM AEST
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That's great
Cheers,
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