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Cancelled
Contributed by
ruby1987
on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:19:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Cancelled
with all that
i got
devastated
for this loss
refuse to a
one last cry
wish the feeling
was gone
this time
looking out
on the rest
secure my beat
tight
cant subject
myself to
such pain
its undeniable
to make one bleed
this time
crazy how
the burises
reappear and the
cuts re-open
under the poplar
tree i live
in black and white
cancelled refused
a
one last cry
this time
Copyright ©
ruby1987
... [
2004-11-26 06:19:03]
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Re: Cancelled
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:46:59 AM AEST
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| I can definitely relate to this, you let out your emotions well in this poem. Nice write :) |
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Re: Cancelled
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 08:18:13 AM AEST
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nice work ruby well written.
Johnny. |
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Re: Cancelled
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by persia on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:51:36 AM AEST
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cool poem
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