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Nights In New York part one The Goth Princess
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:24:41 AM in AEST
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I saw her looking out her window
She was crying and looked so beautiful
I do no think I have ever seen someone so sad
She opened her window came out and stood on the ledge
I knew what she was about to do and knew I had to stop her
I rushed upstairs into my room it was right next to hers
I got out of my window and went to hers
She still had not jumped so I pushed her inside
While she was on the floor crying I held her
So she would not rush out again
I calmed her down and then she told me everything
Her boyfriend broke up with her and her mother died
And she felt completely destroyed
Her mother overdosed and her boyfriend could not stand her emotional state
She also told me she tried to hang her self and showed me the marks around her neck
I pulled down my turtle neck and showed her mine
I got them a few weeks ago when I tried to do the same
She asked me why I tried to do so and I told her why
I could not stand being me any longer
I she said she could relate
I asked her if she was really going to jump
And she said she did not know
But was glad that I did what I did
Because she really needed someone to talk to
I told her that I had been watching her crying at her window for days
But had not seen her leave her room to talk to her
I told her she must be hungry and then took her out to eat
She went out her door and I went out her window back to my place to lock up
When I got to my room I noticed someone stole my television set
It was broken anyways but still I could have gotten it fixed oh well
I really love New York
Well I went outside and locked my door
Then went next door to hers and knocked
She opened it and came outside
And I was overwhelmed
She looked so beautiful all made up like a Goth princess
With her red hair picked up into two small buns
And a black velvet & Tartan bodice top and red plad tartan mini skirt and black boots
Its amazing how fast girls get dressed and clean when in a hurry
I my self had on a grey turtleneck shirt and black tartan pants
She looked very happy and said she was hungry and felt like some sushi
I told her I knew the perfect place and we went down stairs holding hands
We went to my car and she was amazed I had one not really needing it
I told her its how I got to New York and for a while was my apartment
And might soon be again coz I had lost my job but still had some money left
So well we got in and went for a drive in the lovely New York traffic
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Re: Nights In New York part one The Goth Princess
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by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:44:57 AM AEST
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wow, amazing John, I eagerly await the next one :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Nights In New York part one The Goth Princess
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by little_genna on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:32:05 AM AEST
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I cant wait to read the next one.....im already hooked on it...
This is so amazing....
Good job Hun,
Love
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Re: Nights In New York part one The Goth Princess
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:08:21 PM AEST
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Wow!! I was totally captivated by this.. Great write.
Now I'm off to read the next part...
Jenni |
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Re: Nights In New York part one The Goth Princess
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:41:40 AM AEST
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Very nice. Good work again. Part II here I come....
~Carrie~ |
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