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Through The Eyes of Love
Contributed by
Rhymer4ever
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Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 03:58:34 PM in AEST
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Through The Eyes of Love
I sat in the corner waiting for the girl that loved me so. To pick me up and hug me then off to bed we'd go
If only I could tell all the things that I have seen, of all the pain that she's been through and why she feels unclean.
She's sleeping now and here he comes sneaking through the door. I know what's on his mind I know what she's in for
The girl started crying wishing she were dead. When he did those horrible things to her while kneeling by the bed.
She knew it was impossible to tell about her shame. Nobody would believe that her Daddy was to blame.
I've been with her forever since the day that she was born. I've always been her favorite and I really am quite worn.
Lord, if only I could talk, to tell the secrets that I share, if only I were real but I'm only a Teddy Bear.
Copyright 1997 by Ellen Rector, All rights reserved
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Re: Through The Eyes of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:33:37 PM AEST (User
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Very creative thinking and writing.
This is very sad but written like a professional writer.
My Father never abused me but an uncle did.
Hang tuff, my friend.
Keep writing. this is a masterpeice even tho very sad but life is sad many times.
luv, huggs, strength. hope,
emy |
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Re: Through The Eyes of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gothchyk on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:10:24 PM AEST (User
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Great write, you can tell that a lot of emotion was put into this. It takes guts to write about this stuff, and even more to talk about it, trust me I know. Anyway keep writing. |
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Re: Through The Eyes of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhymer4ever on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 03:48:54 PM AEST (User
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Thanks a lot for the comments, very much appreciated...Take care....Ellen |
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