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Emotions Color Your Thoughts
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:09:49 PM in AEST
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Emotions color your thoughts
Shades of rage, jealousy, depression
Entwining, circling one another
Fusing, flowing simultaneously
Fabricating an obscure rainbow
Seen through a cloudy day.
Skies of red, green, blue
Fading together,
Forming an intricate
Vision of another life;
Free of three-dimensional logic.
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cuddlytiger17
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2004-11-26 19:09:49]
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Re: Emotions Color Your Thoughts
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:12:11 PM AEST
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| Great write even if it was short. |
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Re: Emotions Color Your Thoughts
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:31:23 PM AEST
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this paints SUCH a dreamy, strange picture of life in general...
it's spectacular...
I like how you phrase it "seen THROUGH a cloudy sky"
as if it's the lense through which we look...
mesmerizing.
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Re: Emotions Color Your Thoughts
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by Catalina on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:38:47 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this. Well written.
~Catalina~ |
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Re: Emotions Color Your Thoughts
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 02:50:51 PM AEST
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Well done.
The theme of color
and emotion was carried out
very well and not one-dimensionally.
"Fabricating an obscure rainbow."
It's good stuff.
--Mothy |
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