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The darkness of the valley
Contributed by
pyro_maniac
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Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 08:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The darkness of the valley
has taken over me
The darkness of the valley
wont let me free
The darkness of the valley
took my soul
The darkness of the valley
will take my life as its toll
The darkness of the valley
left me all alone
The darkness of the valley
makes me cold to the bone
The darkness of the valley
Is takeing over my life
The darkness of the valley
has left me in grieff
The darkness of the valley
has killed my anxious soul
The darkness of the valley
has left me in a dark hole
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pyro_maniac
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2004-11-27 08:39:04]
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Re: The darkness of the valley
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:43:43 AM AEST
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I like it, especially the last stanza. Great write.
Katie |
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Re: The darkness of the valley
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:06:15 PM AEST
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The darkness I hate the darkness but it is apart of everyday life for us that feel it's pull.
Good write.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: The darkness of the valley
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by EternalNight4x on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 07:36:46 PM AEST
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| well written, darkness is a part of my life to and I can very much relate to this poem..well great job keep it up...oh and I liked the repetetiveness of the darkness of the valley |
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Re: The darkness of the valley
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:01:39 PM AEST
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| A well written poem. Very sad. |
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