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Poem of missing you
Contributed by
lunartune
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Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 11:37:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Poem of missing you
I watch my reflection slowly fade from your eyes
I feel your hands and lips grow cold
You are dying in my tight embrace
My world grows dim without your light
I watch you as your heart descends
amongst the ever falling stars
I’m willing my soul to follow behind you
So we can clasp hands even in death
I stray through dark lands
attempting to find your ever wandering soul
The blackness of your death
taints my once bright sprit
My eyes glow with a deep affection
for death now that you’ve gone.
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lunartune
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2004-11-27 11:37:28]
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Re: Poem of missing you
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by pixie on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 11:38:30 AM AEST
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awww so very sad, very well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Poem of missing you
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 11:44:25 AM AEST
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Such sadmess may you find the light of love once more.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Poem of missing you
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by travisk on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 11:01:58 PM AEST
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I've found they don't even have to be dying in any sense to make you feel that way
nice write |
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