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WRITTEN IN BLOOD
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:11:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Written in blood is my past,
Her blood,
Her life taken,
Her love I shall never
forget.
Her soul shall always have
a place to rest within me.
I cannot give her my dreams
for they torture me.
Written in blood is my now.
A life of damnation I lead,
For her soul has not found
rest within me.
Her soul is lost in torment,
I wish for death to take me,
So that I may find her again,
So that her soul may rest beside
me.
Written in blood is my future.
Death has come for me.
I write from the grave,
Yes her soul was here
waiting for me.
A love reunited in death
is what I wanted it to be,
My our souls rest for entirety.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
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2004-11-27 12:11:33]
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Re: WRITTEN IN BLOOD
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by pixie on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:12:59 PM AEST
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you write some really powerful and emotional stuff Dennis *hugs* very well written,
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Re: WRITTEN IN BLOOD
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 02:38:23 PM AEST
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Deep and powerful write...
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Re: WRITTEN IN BLOOD
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:59:28 AM AEST
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hey.. This was a powerful write.. Very well written. It made me feel so emotional and I did almost start to cry.. Very great write..
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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