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Why try?
Contributed by
Unheard_Mute
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Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 08:08:20 PM in AEST
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Pull out my hair cause I've been stressin,
A lesson in anti-depressin,
Mental pain is worse than physical,
Quizzical how it begins to tickle,
How it is worth anything to take away the pain,
Rain down my crimson champagne,
Or cry until my eyes are dry,
Pry at my face until I die,
Fall to my knees and grasp my chest,
Pain inside my breast that's worst than the rest,
It doesn't cease but only gets worst,
I'm cursed to take this head first,
Self inflicted hurt won't stop this one,
No where to run, I'm done,
I give up, I fold, I quit,
The fuse is lit, I'm done with this ****....
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2004-11-27 20:08:20]
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Re: Why try?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 08:19:28 PM AEST
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Very sad but well said.
I use to have these type feelings but one day I got lucky and a smart Dr. found the right meds for me.
In this day-n-age we live in a person needs all the help they can get even if it comes in a pill.
A masterpeice as manny, manny, manny suffer from depression.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy |
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Re: Why try?
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:16:54 PM AEST
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| sounds like you are going through a lot emotional wise. but remember emotions change. why try is what you ask. the reason is because if you never try you are settling to live in misery of wondering what could have happened. live like there is no yesterday, and dont live for the tomorrow that may never come. |
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Re: Why try?
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:25:32 PM AEST
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I really like this one. Mental pain is worse than physical...Love that line. ad the rhyming in this one makes it amazing. love it
Lauren
(getting sick of my comments yet? sorry if you are...i just lvoe your work) |
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Re: Why try?
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by HolyGreenDuck on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:14:47 PM AEST
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I am sorry you feel this way James, but I understand in a way...
Ta ta
Hannah |
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