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meant to be
Contributed by
karmen
on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:53:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i feel it in my stomach
and i know we're meant to be
the vision of us
its so perfect you see
i love u more then anything
to me you mean so much
i cant wait till the day we meet
till that day i get to feel your touch
late night phone calls
telling each other everything
baby you are like a perfect melody
just like when the angels sing
baby you are my heaven
from this hell
Your my everything, my world
i hope u can tell
i feel and know u are my one and only
i love u
i know this in my head, and have it in my heart
i feel it, i feel that this is all true
and of all the mistakes ive made
u still love, and forgive me
baby your so awesome, your perfect for me
to my heart you are the key
baby i love u!
this is what im trying to say, you see
i truely feel and believe
you and i are meant to be
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karmen
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2004-11-27 21:53:34]
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Re: meant to be
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by Jodwin on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:10:30 AM AEST
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| Maybe a bit repetitive and the word "baby" doesn't fit in in my opinion, but excluding those two, it's a good poem. |
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