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I Am (The Darkness)
Contributed by
parkman
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:17:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I Am ( the darkness)
Dont shut your eyes, Im coming for you When I arrive, youll know not what to do Ill enter your mind, into the darkest recess Then your thoughts, Ill start to undress
Ill open them up and set them free To poison your mind, give it insanity Youll not know why, torment and pain Twisted thoughts, youll never be the same
My voice it will lead you, rot your brain Take you into the sewer, from where you came The cesspit of life, surrounded by the mad Where youll always dwell, happily, feeling sad
So come with me angel, the time is now right To live in the shadows, out of the light I am the darkness, that will forever be Keeping the dead alive, alive in misery
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-11-28 04:17:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Am (The Darkness)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:24:39 AM AEST (User
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I think it lacks...purpose. But that's just me. |
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Re: I Am (The Darkness)
(User Rating: 1 ) by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 04:42:14 AM AEST (User
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a poem you would love to hate but can't.. I just wrote a poem about being afraid of the dark.. and then I come across yours.. sticks her tongue out at you... no.. just kidding.. wow you got it down .. exactly what I tried to say.. you feel me.. and im scared of you lol... sandy |
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Re: I Am (The Darkness)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:56:17 AM AEST (User
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"Where you’ll always dwell, happily, feeling sad"
Nice write, Parkman. |
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Re: I Am (The Darkness)
(User Rating: 1 ) by EternalNight4x on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:32:12 AM AEST (User
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very interesting write, very decsriptive...I really enjoyed this write something about dark poems I really enjoy...well keep on posting |
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Re: I Am (The Darkness)
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:14:53 AM AEST (User
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another amazing dark write,
pixie xx |
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