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Save Me From The Nothing
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:28:46 AM in AEST
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Save me from the nothing please,
Help me up before he sees,
If he does he will be fuming,
His rage will then begin blooming.
I will feel his merciless wrath,
If I ever dared to cross his path,
If I look at him he twists my soul,
Throws me in the fire like a lump of coal.
He scares me to my wits end,
All I need is one good friend,
To help me escape his deadly clutches,
Before my sanity he butchers.
He has threatened that if I told,
That I would die a twenty-two year old,
That he will crush & rupture my spine,
Into my skull he would then entwine.
The fear wells up with my bile,
Feels like I have swallowed a glass file,
I try to scream, scream for help,
But upon my body he casts another whelk.
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pixie
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2004-11-28 11:28:46]
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Re: Save Me From The Nothing
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:09:02 PM AEST
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| Wowzeers pixie....this was....amazing. |
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Re: Save Me From The Nothing
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:15:57 PM AEST
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| this is an amazing poem and you will always have a friend in me |
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Re: Save Me From The Nothing
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:59:02 PM AEST
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| I understand that feeling....I do. This is an awsome poem. |
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Re: Save Me From The Nothing
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:38:43 AM AEST
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Wow this is very sad but written well.
No wonder u r angry if this is what u go thru.
p.m. me any time.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Save Me From The Nothing
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by Rxqueen on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:49:34 AM AEST
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| Wow, what a depressing but well written peice. I could feel the pain. Good one. |
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