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COLD STEEL BLUE EYES

Contributed by Alexander_McDonald on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Oh baby,
Look what I've got,
Cold steel blue eyes.

They're burnin' hot,
Cold steel blue eyes.

Like fire an' ice.
But it's not too nice,
To have,
Cold steel blue eyes.

Baby,
Help me,
Take the knife,
Out of the stare,
Of these,
Cold steel blue eyes.

Baby,
Please,
Give my life,
Something,
For which to care.
In these,
Cold steel blue eyes.

Baby,
Can you,
Stop these,
Cold steel blue eyes,
From seeing only,
Gray?

Oh baby,
Please,
Take these,
Cold steel blue eyes,
Away.

Baby,
Can you,
Make these,
Cold steel blue eyes,
See without harm?

Oh baby,
Can you,
Give these,
Cold steel blue eyes,
The calm,
In the eye,
Of the storm?

Baby,
Can you,
Make these,
Cold steel blue eyes,
Warm again?

Oh baby,
Please,
Take the pain,
Out of these,
Cold steel blue eyes.

Baby,
Help me,
See the light,
Through these,
Cold steel blue eyes.

Baby,
Can you,
Please,
Make these,
Cold steel blue eyes,
Bright?

Oh baby,
Look what I've got.
Cold steel blue eyes.

They're burnin' hot,
Cold steel blue eyes.

Like fire an' ice.
But it's not too nice,
To have,
Cold steel blue eyes.

No surprise,
To me.

I have,
Cold steel blue eyes.

You see.

Copyright 1993 by Alexander McDonald
All rights reserved
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Copyright Â© Alexander_McDonald ... [ 2002-11-23 21:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: COLD STEEL BLUE EYES (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 04:53:15 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful
I really enjoyed the way you
gave vision of such pain
and love all through your eyes
Thanks for sharing this one
I really enjoyed it, and the title
is great!!
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: COLD STEEL BLUE EYES (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:36:53 PM AEST
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good work
on this poem .

Re: COLD STEEL BLUE EYES (User Rating: 1 )
by iamteddies on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 06:26:24 PM AEST
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This is quite a striking poem.
iamteddies

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