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SHE'S ON MY MIND
Contributed by
Alexander_McDonald
on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 09:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She's on my mind, All the time. Like a lost sheep, It wanders back to her. She's on my mind. In my sleep, I cannot keep, But to dream of her. She's on my mind. Like a heavy weight, Bearing down on my heart, With an ache. She's on my mind. Like a thought I cannot shake. Like a feeling I cannot fake. Like a fever I cannot break. She's on my mind, When I am lonely. But I am not so alone. I am only, Waiting for her return. She's on my mind. Calling to me like a Siren. She's a sad song, I have been, Singing all along. Copyright 1993 by Alexander McDonald All rights reserved. www.avatar-ink.com
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Re: SHE'S ON MY MIND
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:44:35 PM AEST (User
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Real good sounds like a song! Christina |
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Re: SHE'S ON MY MIND
(User Rating: 1 ) by nebill on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 03:39:27 AM AEST (User
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I love this poem. It expresses feelings that I have had myself, and you said it well! |
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Re: SHE'S ON MY MIND
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 06:17:13 AM AEST (User
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This sounds really nice.....
Jenni |
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Re: SHE'S ON MY MIND
(User Rating: 1 ) by Panther_1978 on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 10:49:26 PM AEST (User
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Hello Alexander, What a great write! That's the way I felt when I had my first love... Thanks for sharing Panther |
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Re: SHE'S ON MY MIND
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sarah22 on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 10:54:55 PM AEST (User
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love is so very
speacil keep
writing and may
god bless u in the future. |
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