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The Wounds
Contributed by
Inevitable
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:37:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I get cut up inside
just like you.
I bleed when I'm hurt
just like you.
I feel the pain
just like you
I'm left in the rain
just like you
My eyes sting
like yours
My heart burns
like yours
My soul shivers
like yours
My spirit quivers
like yours
I never cry
and neither do you
I never give in
and neither should you
I never say sorry
which in a way isn't true
I never leave it unfinished
but sadly, you do
I walk on the ice
but it's too cold for you
I drink all the wine
but it's too strong for you
I'll spit out the blood
but you'll keep it inside
I'll repent all my sins
but you'll run and hide
I've cut you so deeply
formed so many wounds
I hope you can do the right thing,
and walk away from me soon
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2004-11-28 14:37:50]
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Re: The Wounds
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by LilGnefkow on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:06:50 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a really good poem. You can make a lot of money off your poetry someday.
Again, really really good poem.
You have a lot of talent |
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