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Torn Away
Contributed by
ESweetie711
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:36:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You tore my heart from the inside out
Whether it was intentional or not I do not know
All the time we spent together was nice and fun
But I feel there were secret reasons for you hanging out with me.
Every time we hung out we went to work
It was fun and even nice getting to talk
After a while though you started to avoid me
You even began to make a false accusation.
Asking me if I defaced your property hurt alot
I couldn't understand at first why you asked me that
Then it became clear that it was that woman
That woman which you claimed to be helping in her time of need.
For a week straight you hung out with her
You spoke to me little and when you did, it was short
I thought it was just temporary, you avoiding me
But now I feel completely used.
Wasting away, tearing from the inside out
I can't help how I feel, I've never felt this way before
You make me feel what I never felt before
Giving me affection you claimed no one else could have.
You said you were not ready for a relationship and so I waited
But I think now that you just used me and that hurts
If only you could give me clear signals everything would be fine
However, I can't wait forever.
The tears unfold, slowly filling the oceans
While it's not tremendous, the pain is awful
So awful such as that of someone who's been poisoned
Poisoned with the obscurities of helping another.
I will wait for you, oh my dear soul mate
Though how long I can wait I do not know
I feel imprisoned by you, and am not able to touch another
I have tried and tried but it comes back to you.
So please, please show me you are truthful
That you are the person I met back in July
I really want you to come back again
So we can get back to what we had before that woman.
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ESweetie711
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2004-11-28 15:36:15]
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Re: Torn Away
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:59:54 PM AEST
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Good write, I know where you are coming from.
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Re: Torn Away
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:06:47 PM AEST
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| I feel like that with a guy I love. He hurt me so bad that I'm still torn apart after four years. Every poem I ever wrote except 2 are about him. |
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Re: Torn Away
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by Satrianus on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 06:00:33 AM AEST
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| A very good write ! I know exactly what you feel. Something similar happened to me last week ! Not sure if waiting is the solution, but love works in mysterious ways..... |
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