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owned by death
Contributed by
pam
on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
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my mind wanders
Is my time up?
what will I gain
if everything is lost?
the wind blows hard on my front door
and I wonder is that death
on it's way for me?
I walk through the hall
the light there is dim
and I see my shadow
upon the wall
I stop suddenly
I feel a presence
and I wonder is this my time to fall?
I wake up in the night
and a cold chill stays with me
and I cry in my mind to know the answer
at noontime daytime nighttime still
this question lingers upon my soul
etched into my mind and every move I make
this is not a question of what might happen
but this is the certainty of life
Copyright ©
pam
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2002-11-23 22:00:00]
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Re: owned by death
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:43:26 PM AEST
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| Really god write! Nobody knows when its their time! Christina |
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Re: owned by death
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by Nessiecat on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 03:04:35 AM AEST
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This is a great poem, but please don't forget that you're here to live mate.
xxx Nessiecat |
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Re: owned by death
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 05:42:39 AM AEST
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So true..but you've got to enjoy the time you have here...
Jenni |
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Re: owned by death
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 06:29:38 AM AEST
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really good poem, it speaks the trtuth in every line, and you say t like it is, no sugar coating which makes a poem best.
Ali |
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Re: owned by death
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by OreO on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 03:34:43 PM AEST
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I've always said "Time" is very
important and it says alot of things
none of us know when our time
comes, and many of us create
our own time to go. Thanks for
sharing this one i enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: owned by death
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by plous on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 06:33:56 PM AEST
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| Have you tried converting that to lyrics maybe, some changes would be needed for it, slow blues maybe, the poem itself is very good, I like how it builds up then ends. |
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Re: owned by death
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by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 02:38:50 PM AEST
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~very good you got a talent
take advantage of it~
~you have a life here don't lose it!~
~britteny~ |
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