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Life's Strange Moves
Contributed by
sean88
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:49:07 PM in AEST
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A month or two ago
I was living on a high,
So many things went my way
Bad times were nowhere nearby,
Id wake up in the morning
And look forward to my day,
As everything had started
Turning in my way,
So what went wrong from now till then,
I cant understand just why
My lifes been turned upon its head,
In no more than a blink of the eye,
Im back stuck in singleton
I guess this is where I belong,
Ive just had too many brakes
And got everything completely wrong,
I hate this cursed pain
Its eating me from within,
When will my chance arrive
And when will good times begin
Copyright ©
sean88
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2004-11-28 15:49:07]
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Re: Life's Strange Moves
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:52:39 PM AEST
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Its a good write. Sounds a lot like what most of us go thru at one time or another. Hope everything works out for you soon. Keep writing.
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Re: Life's Strange Moves
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:53:42 PM AEST
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| there is so mch emotion in this poem!!! i love it!!! great job, and i hope things look up for u soon. im always here if u need to talk...i understand how rough life can be. |
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Re: Life's Strange Moves
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:21:51 PM AEST
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It sounds like you are going through a rouf time and i hope things turn in the better direction for you soon. I really like this poem because it shows your emotions and shows that you really care. Life is strange but we just have to adapt to the new conditions and try to move on. If you need someone to talk to, im here! well anyway - great write!
*~*luckie - lynn*~*
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Re: Life's Strange Moves
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:48:04 PM AEST
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| great write. very emotional. |
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