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Thunderstorms
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 05:48:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Thunderstorms feel like soft peaceful misery
Pulling itself upon me
As I remember you
Cold air feels like sharp needles
Fighting their way into me
Smell of sweet scented grass
Moist with the morning storm
Sky..Dark, Gloomy, Grey
Much like how I feel
Thunder rolls like hundreds of horses
Galloping in the wind
I see you siting there
A smile peacefully laying on your face
And my heart, still very sore and broken
Leaves with the storm.
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2004-11-28 17:48:59]
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Re: Thunderstorms
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:12:47 PM AEST
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very pretty..... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Thunderstorms
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by HellsLibrarian on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:33:47 PM AEST
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| much better than my first poem. I like it. |
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Re: Thunderstorms
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 06:33:59 PM AEST
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so beautiful a longing touch to it with wonderful images I really enjoyed it
Michelle |
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