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The Thunder
Contributed by
Rous
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:04:39 PM in AEST
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The approaching darkness heralds
The coming night
The many gathered below impatiently await
The bursting light
The flowers bloom to sudden life
The dying, quicker
The stars break apart and fall
The lights, they flicker
Half a million people
Await with baited breath
Explode in thunderous applause
Only memories are left
Paper and debris float
Silence is a sound
The flotsam of a grateful throng
Litters up the ground
The only stars out now
Are nightly ones
Left behind in splendor
Remnants of the suns
The Thunder now is gone
Its time is past
Another year til it returns
It will have to last
Copyright ©
Rous
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2004-11-28 20:04:39]
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Re: The Thunder
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:24:51 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very informative and creative piece. =] |
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Re: The Thunder
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by Rous on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:27:25 PM AEST
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| Thank you, very much. |
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Re: The Thunder
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:28:03 AM AEST
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Discritive---nice
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Re: The Thunder
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:45:49 AM AEST
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| This is pretty. I just love fireworks and don't see a lot of poems about them. Beautiful. Blessings. |
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