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Drained
Contributed by
CaddishCut
on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:15:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I hope that she was fun
I hope that she's your one
But I thought that I would be
Now you act so desperately
I'll just put my heart out on the table
And then you'll be able
To chew on it some more
You made me a whore
I'll just pour my blood onto the floor
And then you'll walk through that door
To drain me of it all
Then my corpse will fall
Down to the floor
Out on the table
Drain me of it all
Walk all over me
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2004-11-28 20:15:18]
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Re: Drained
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 08:25:40 PM AEST
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| Sorry to hearabout that! Love is rough sometimes but it will all work out for you I'm sure! Christina |
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Re: Drained
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by Stoney1 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 12:48:03 AM AEST
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Under certain conditions; gums can be nice.
Stoney |
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Re: Drained
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by pixie on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:16:07 AM AEST
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wow that was so sad, emotional and powerfully written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Drained
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:09:49 PM AEST
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| well...at least you weren't left for a man..only way I know to look at it..or a transgender..or.. a transvestite midget.. |
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