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+ Open Flame +
Contributed by
AdamChantell
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:38:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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+ Open Flame +
So here we are close,
Finally;
Near the open flame,
Both our hearts beat,
They are one in the same;
I feel your silence,
It tells me a story,
About how you dont want to be hurt,
I am not the one to let you down,
Ill be there through it all
Through snow, fog, or rain
Its all the same,
Your eyes reflect the flames from the fire
I see a glimpse of a smile
The fire starts to grow
Both outside and inside
The fire grows;
The flames from the fire from outside is hotter
We both move away
You tell me why youre silent
I tell you its okay
I know she is shy
But something happened that night
I wanted to hold her close
Telling her its going to be okay
Copyright ©
AdamChantell
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2004-11-28 21:38:09]
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Re: + Open Flame +
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:08:23 PM AEST
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| this is good man. its always a memory when you can understand and be there for a woman |
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Re: + Open Flame +
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:48:30 PM AEST
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it was very good........women are mysteriouse and like to be held,i would know i kinda am one. lol but i loved it.
Alyssa Koren Davidson |
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