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I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End)
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Doriens_Picture
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Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:27:57 PM in AEST
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I am broken
Another piece of glass
You use to cut your self
You need me
You can always trust me
I will never leave your side
I can bring you
All the things you want
When you are looking for an end
I was once
A mirror looking at you crying
When you thought you had no friends
I loved you
But you hated everything
That I thought was beautiful in you
You punched me
I broke into a million pieces
I cut you and you liked the way I felt
Its something to
Replace all your hurt when
Wanting to feel the comforting pain
You took me in hand
And put me to your skin
And stated to cut your self again
And ever since
Nor you and I have been the same
Both broken and incomplete filled with shame
I am broken
Another piece of glass
You use to cut your self
And you are now
Just another beautiful cutter
Who had enough and used me
To find an end
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Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End)
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:02:41 AM AEST
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And ever since
Nor you and I have been the same
Both broken and incomplete filled with shame
This is missing something..? maybe neither..I"m not sure.. but it's a wonderful poem. |
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Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End)
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by little_genna on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:43:44 AM AEST
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This is very good,
At first i werent sure where this one was going,
But then it all started to make more sense to me.
Im still not sure if its a good thing that i can relate to this but hey thats life.
Good write though......
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Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End)
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:33:40 AM AEST
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| groovi |
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Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End)
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by ImHearingVoices on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:55:15 AM AEST
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| This is ace very good poem got into it and I want more..Lovely write x |
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Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End)
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by WildfireRose on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:06:23 PM AEST
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| that was so sad yet beautiful |
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Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End)
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:15:46 PM AEST
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ImHearingVoices is my best friend.. shes commented.
This was painful and enchanting x x |
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Re: I Am Broken (A Way To Find An End)
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:35:55 PM AEST
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Awesome write,
And you are now
Just another beautiful cutter
Who had enough and used me
To find an end
what a way to end a poem that shows so much. |
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