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fix things
Contributed by
karmen
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:31:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My thoughts have all gone
my feelings disapear
ever since you left me
I've been getting more near
But then I mess up again
and the lies have stopped
I promise you that
but I feel that I've been dropped
I know you love me
and I love you too
so please lets fix things
I know we can make it through
You are my world
When your not here, it's like the electricity is out
I'm more sorry then you could know
I truely believe things will get better, without a doubt
I know it will take time
and like you always say "time will tell"
I swear I'll make things better
together we can stop the fighting, I promise not to yell
Your my one and only
and I believe I'm yours too
I love you more then life itself
we will make it through!
Copyright ©
karmen
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2004-11-29 01:31:39]
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Re: fix things
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by Clementine on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:20:48 AM AEST
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great write....it's so sweet!
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Re: fix things
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:25:17 AM AEST
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| awww. hope things get better. good write. |
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