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dads pain
Contributed by
karmen
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:19:49 AM in AEST
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Why did you leave me?
Did you not care?
I was so young
and still needed you there
How could you just leave like that?
Without saying I love you or goodbye
Do you have any idea how you made me feel?
I felt like you wanted me to die
How could you just turn your back?
So cold and blue
you must not have even cared dad.
I didn't know what to do
You were suppose to be here to help raise me
Keep me safe from danger
and teach me how to do things
But now your a complete stranger
Growing up watching other kids with there dads,
flying a kite
and learning how to ride there bikes
It hurt to see that sight
Now I hope you know,
how much you've hurt me
so if you decide to come back, remember,
I grew up without you, and now i dont need you so let it be!
Copyright ©
karmen
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2004-11-29 02:19:49]
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Re: dads pain
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 02:31:22 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
So sorry u have to go thru this.
luv, huggs,
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Re: dads pain
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by girish on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:49:09 AM AEST
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i feel sorry for ur condition. your father may be an unlucky person for not remaining with such a child. but god is there for all. read my poems of that kind.
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Re: dads pain
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:42:07 AM AEST
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| Written well, with emotion fueling your words, and memories painted in ink, awesome poem. |
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Re: dads pain
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:55:27 AM AEST
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very sad.
i can understood fully why you would feel this way though. you have every right to.
this was well written. |
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