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Hard to do
Contributed by
aden6942
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:30:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A decision made in sin
Words seperating worlds
Lives changed within
The ending of the begining
Two different souls
Together times choppy
Times worth living?
If being unhappy
A future not known
Choices unthought
Futures unsown
With a selfish retort
Copyright ©
aden6942
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2004-11-29 03:30:10]
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Re: Hard to do
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:04:18 AM AEST
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I know what you mean about breaking up, it's one of the hardest thing a human bieng can do to another person. Great write, and keep that creative mind writting.
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Re: Hard to do
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:36:05 AM AEST
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| No one likes breaking up, your poem showed strength, ryme and flow, awesome. |
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Re: Hard to do
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by bruised_hands08 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:29:38 AM AEST
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Great... please email me sometime... I would love to talk. I just got broken up with my my boyfriend and it's the hardest thing I've ever done.
purple_candy_clouds@excite.com |
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