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Anger
Contributed by
Angel_Eyez
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 06:56:28 AM in AEST
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The anger is over whelming
The slightest little thing
The pain of how they treat me
Cant take it anymore
You always have a say
When it doesnt concern you
I always give in
I cant take the strain
I go to bed
Before I sleep
It visits me
The urge
The hunger
The pain I want to vanquish
It becomes so hard
The one thing that can change it
I gave up long ago
The sound of razors on fresh flesh
Deep and crimson red
It was my love
The one thing that made me better
The pain is for a second the scars a lifetime
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Angel_Eyez
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2004-11-29 06:56:28]
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Re: Anger
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:38:49 AM AEST
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Words of anguish and anger I see, yet in flow and ryme, written well and with real feelings awesome poem.
This Stanza hit home....know it so well!
The pain is for a second the scars a lifetime
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Re: Anger
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:48:46 AM AEST
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this made me think... i know this feeling so well, even though i've been told that if i quit NOW then i'll only have my scars for another five years or so...
powerful write.
it raised my thoughts up HIE!
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