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Flood of Lies
Contributed by
deathly_rose
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:16:40 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Flood of lies
I walk down the stairs,
down to the basement,
where all of my lies are hid.
I walk down,
water at my feet.
Water so cold,
its taking over my body, my soul.
I slowly continue to walk through this flood of lies,
but how can this be? Its so deep, towards the people I despise.
Slowly going under,
I find my way down.
Down to the heavens of below.
I open my eyes, to see nothing but water,
water surrounding me, taking over my body.
I feel it coming, I hold my breath, awaiting my death,
though it never comes.
I get out of the water, for a gasp of air,
slowly I begin to swim, towards the stairs of my life.
Escalating, the pain is overbearing.
I walk up the stairs, all of the lies are behind me,
the shadows in front.
Faces disoriented,
figures a blur.
I dont understand just what to do,
this is my present
this is my past,
How long will this life be?
How long will it last?
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2004-11-29 08:16:40]
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Re: Flood of Lies
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by givingin on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:38:44 AM AEST
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very good alicia,
It's very powerful.
MUAH!!
love you. |
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Re: Flood of Lies
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:46:51 AM AEST
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| a very good poem here..i liked this one quite a bit. |
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Re: Flood of Lies
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:21:46 AM AEST
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great poem bro...i'm asking the same questions...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Flood of Lies
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:46:49 AM AEST
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| Dark and cool metaphor. Blessings. |
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Re: Flood of Lies
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by xMizeriex on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:48:57 AM AEST
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I like this ^_^
Bx |
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