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You Will Die
Contributed by
MasterWeasel
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:38:28 AM in AEST
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Very soon you'll see your death
You'll hear my laugh as you draw your last breath
There is nothing you can say
You will not live another day
Your death will be slow; you'll writhe in pain
I'll free your soul, your body slain
I will stalk your every turn
I'll tear your flesh and make it burn
Your house will be consumed in flame
Because to me it's just a game
And, if I should feel the need.
I'll slice you open and watch you bleed
I'll then push salt into your gashes
And bury you alive in your family's ashes
Or perhaps if I have some time to bide
I'll wrap you up in fresh raw-hide
As sunlight dries these ropes of flesh
Your innards will burst out of your chest
And if I do not want to wait
I could just decapitate
I will not pity you at all
As I cut you with a rusty saw
Your corpse will lay mangled and severed in half
As I indulge in a sadistic laugh
I'll shoot you with a poison dart
Then I'll show you your own heart
I'll make you cry; I'll make you scream
I'll impale you with an iron beam
I'll collect blood from the gaping hole
And drink it from your hollowed skull
I will cause you so much harm
You'll welcome death with open arms
The very thought amuses me
For I don't feel your agony
I'll feed your body to wild dogs
Or lay it amongst some rotting logs
You ask how I could do such things;
I cannot tell you why
The only thing I really know is I want you to die
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MasterWeasel
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Re: You Will Die
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by givingin on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:46:48 AM AEST
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very good write,
I liked that one!
very dark!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: You Will Die
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by Strawberry_Stitch on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:55:46 AM AEST
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very morbid. very nice.
We all want ppl to die... |
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Re: You Will Die
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by Dominick-Destruction on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:10:24 AM AEST
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mmmmm how very dark...I like it...good write, Great imagary
xDDx |
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Re: You Will Die
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:26:40 AM AEST
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Great write I would be afraid if i was the one that ***** you off. I know you said it's a joke but truth lies in joking. great write thou.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: You Will Die
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by Stitch on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:55:00 AM AEST
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Extremely dark and hardly funny, but your talent is undeniable.
Stitch |
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Re: You Will Die
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:54:35 AM AEST
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| Woooooooooooow....EXTREMELY dark...and realy not funny AT ALL......BUT you have an amazing undeniable talent. As long as you don't think like that....your fine =) |
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Re: You Will Die
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by Mr_Jeremy on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:04:42 AM AEST
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I have mastered weasels too.
It is fun when you want people dead and don't mean it, although sometimes it goes too far . . . and . . . |
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Re: You Will Die
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by pixie on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:26:01 AM AEST
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yes a very dark write, full of anger, its good that you can project your anger into your writes , powerful poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: You Will Die
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by Scarlett on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:27:50 AM AEST
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pointing out the obvious, yes it's very dark but also very well put together, real emotion behind each line.
good job |
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Re: You Will Die
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 12:26:35 PM AEST
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Crikey, I don't think I'll ever sleep again!!!!
Intense, vivid, blood curdling, demonic, WOW!
Star x x x |
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