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Master, I Apologise
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:24:51 AM in AEST
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Master I apologise,
But to you I bid my goodbyes,
You have chained me up for years,
Been the creator of my tears.
I am not going to take it,
All your beatings, all your *****,
I deserve respect not hurt,
I leave you here to die in the dirt.
You possessed me for far too long,
Next to you is not where I belong,
I am in love you try to steal it away,
You want all of my emotions to be dark & grey.
I am running, running from you,
Only cruel things to me you do,
You say you love me but you dont,
You say you will leave me alone, but you wont.
You stalk me & will until my death,
Take it all til theres nothing left,
You creep around like a scary shadow,
Whispering to me so Ill know.
No longer can & will I take your games,
I know now it isnt me to blame,
It was never my fault it was always yours,
I have proven to be one of your uncontrollable whores.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-29 11:24:51]
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Re: Master, I Apologise
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by givingin on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:31:33 AM AEST
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Great write pixie,
I enjoyed reading this poem.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Master, I Apologise
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:33:14 AM AEST
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*hugs you*
I always love your darker poems. This is no exception.
Great write hun.
*hugs*
Phil xxx
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Re: Master, I Apologise
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by daydreamer22 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:54:53 AM AEST
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osm...espeacially the last line...
awaiting your next...
~*ME*~ |
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Re: Master, I Apologise
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by Stitch on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 11:58:13 AM AEST
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WOAH! YOU GO GIRL!
Stitch |
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Re: Master, I Apologise
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:20:36 PM AEST
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I have proven to be one of your uncontrollable whores
pixie this last line quite frankly i'm shocked! what will the vicar say! shame on you girl!...
Apart from that this is a bloody good write!
Johnny.
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Re: Master, I Apologise
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:49:56 PM AEST
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pixie
Rebellious and emancipated!
Love it! |
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Re: Master, I Apologise
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:27:30 PM AEST
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PERFECT!!!!! Rebellion, defiance, anger... I love it!!! Excellent piece, talented pixie! I do hope you are doing better. Much love and hugs!!! Take care of yourself! Great write, as always. Forever,
FleurdeSang P.S.- YOU GO GIRL! |
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Re: Master, I Apologise
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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THIS IS AMAZING!!!!! i absolutely loved this!!!!...excellent job.....great work
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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