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Another Autumn
Contributed by
Noshin
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 12:25:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Here I stand alone in oblivion again
Gazing at the autumn leaves
I witness them falling down one after another
Taking away with them all my dreams
I crumple down the autumn leaves under my feet
Crush them to seek a redemption from my sufferings
At last the leaves vanish away from the tree
Reminding me of my eternal pains
Doesnt that happen every autumn
Each falling leaf worsens my everlasting longings
But autumns come n go every year
Brutally snatching away from me all my hopes
And all I do isstanding alone in oblivion
Gazing at the autumn leaves
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Noshin
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2004-11-29 12:25:07]
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Re: Another Autumn
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by pixie on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 12:31:07 PM AEST
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sad and written very beautifully, there is something beautiful about the Autumn isnt there? *hugs*
oh and welcome to YPDC,
pixie xx |
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Re: Another Autumn
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by Noshin on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 12:43:35 PM AEST
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| hey thnx for appreciating it pixxie...n yah ive always been obssessed with autumn..;)..love..Nosh |
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Re: Another Autumn
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:35:30 PM AEST
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Such a melencholy feeling,
sadness and...helplessness.
well thought out and written!
Great job! |
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