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Our Last Song~Acoustic Sketch I Started
Contributed by
sorryiforgot2smile
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 12:28:03 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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The Kiss of Death
A Slice of Humble Pie....for you and I
We're face to face....don't make a move
We're eye to eye.
We are counting down the seconds
'til the moon comes falling down
We were hanging on to moments
which we had spread like disease across this town.
So Promise Me One Thing,
Please forget me when I'm gone
and I won't remember anything except our last song.
So I can sleep at nite, and breathe this time
My fragile ears and coward lips weren't broken from your last line.
And our ashes must have been spread across the virgin snow.
When you said "Sometimes it feels we'd come so far"
and I "It's time for me to go"
So Please Forget Me when I'm gone.
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2004-11-29 12:28:03]
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Re: Our Last Song~Acoustic Sketch I Started
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by pixie on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 12:29:09 PM AEST
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sad write, written with greta flow and feeling,
pixie xx |
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Re: Our Last Song~Acoustic Sketch I Started
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:32:26 PM AEST
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great flowing motion from begining to end.
Sadness and more...aching |
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