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You Had Your Chance
Contributed by
WestCPunk
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:34:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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hypocrital gestures
foul accusations
non-stop name calling
unhealthy friendship
next time you wanna go at it
you might as well bring along your friends to back you up
because one of us is gonna go down soon
and it might as well be you
don't treat me like your sister
dont tell me i act like your mother
just treat me like your cold-hearted enemy
dont think i'll give you the time of day
to try and work this out
because you brought this upon yourself
this time you dug your hole to deep
you're not gonna get out of this one
no matter how determined you are
you really blew it this time
and you wont be given a second chance
so quit while you're ahead
before you end up destroying your own life
the sad thing is.....
is that you dont know when to give up
does it really make you feel that good inside
to know you've just broken another innocent soul?
ever thought about cutting loose?
starting fresh?
possibly cut back on the selfishness
then again maybe thats asking to much of you
you may think a little lie here and there means nothing
but to someone else it means a whole hell of a lot of something!!!
Copyright ©
WestCPunk
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2004-11-29 16:34:48]
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Re: You Had Your Chance
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:38:03 PM AEST
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Again....WOW
You have a poweful hand and a great way of expressing it! |
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Re: You Had Your Chance
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by theMoth on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:40:22 PM AEST
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I like this stuff.
Bitter and very compelling.
--Mothy |
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Re: You Had Your Chance
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by DesperateSoul on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:08:52 PM AEST
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DAMN!!!!!!! That's what I'm Talking About!!!
Straight up and mad and deeep!! I like this stuff! Keep writing and keep posting always!!
*~ D.$.~* |
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Re: You Had Your Chance
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:17:22 AM AEST
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rtight on!
I feel this way about one of my ex friends 2.
Wow,
greaat write!
*~givingin~* |
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