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Twisted Lies
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:19:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She saw his face,
Looked in his eyes,
Soon fell in love,
Was no surprise.
They started dating,
He always let her down,
She said it's okay,
She only showed a frown.
He says things will get better,
Just you wait and see,
She believes the lies he tells her,
Soon together they would be.
Still months later,
He's doing it again,
But she believes his words,
And keeps his love in.
She talks about him always,
How they will get married and more,
People say "she's crazy",
That's not what he wants her for.
He tells her he loves her,
She believes every word,
She fell in his trap,
His lies were all stirred.
Her friends say she's blind,
She says she can see,
But what is missing,
In this puzzle for she?
Ignoring her friends,
Not wanting to believe what they say,
All she can say is he loves her,
In every possible way.
She says things will get better,
But one day she will find,
That his love isn't hers,
He's only playing with her mind.
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MysticFireFairy
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2004-11-29 17:19:59]
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Re: Twisted Lies
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:22:18 PM AEST
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| Very similar to how I am feeling right now. Nice poem |
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Re: Twisted Lies
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:40:36 PM AEST
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Also similar to something I went through. I like how your poem shows the reality of the thoughts of the person. It makes me think you wrote from experience. Very nice I enjoyed reading it. I hope you write more I'll be looking for you. Just don't forget to experiment with different kinds of verse!
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Re: Twisted Lies
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by lifefliesby on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 06:49:40 PM AEST
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awsome poem
great job
I use to/have a girlfriend/more that her friends use to say that...
she dumped me
but then she realized when I said I love her, I meant it.
don't be afraid too love
and be careful
best of luck
keep writing,
Jared |
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Re: Twisted Lies
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:37:59 PM AEST
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| excellent write. well presented. |
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Re: Twisted Lies
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:30:49 AM AEST
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awesome write here Mystic,
pixie xx |
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