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Heartbreak and Tears
Contributed by
Gigi_15
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Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:47:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everytime I fall in love I get heartbroken It's like the more I try The more I feel like I'm dying I just can't stop crying I know it gets me nowhere And it's a feeling I can't bare
You see these tears that I fear Are now falling down my cheek Why does this have to happen to me? What did I do again?
Sometimes I just wonder Maybe love isn't meant to be for me I gave it a try But I just ended up in tears For now my fear is gone For I have given up on love There's no such thing for me There's only heartbreak and tears
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Re: Heartbreak and Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 05:51:58 PM AEST (User
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I like the feeling you put into this poem. Good job! I've felt that way before.
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Re: Heartbreak and Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:23:44 PM AEST (User
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the price of love. ::sigh:: |
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Re: Heartbreak and Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:39:49 PM AEST (User
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It's not only you. After Love leaves, for whatever reason, Desperation and Hoplessness always invade your heart. Don't let them convince you that Love isn't worth it.
Good poem, well expressed.
Take care.
David |
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