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Cry not
Contributed by
Lost_Boy
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:41:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tears running down your eye
cry not for me
it was time for me to die
dont stress your mind
wondering why
i was just dust, thats been blown away
i had to do it
i never wanted to stay
my thoughts was flowing
my mimd began to sway
cry not for me
i just began a new day
Copyright ©
Lost_Boy
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2004-11-29 19:41:36]
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Re: Cry not
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by EternalNight4x on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:16:25 PM AEST
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| well expressed write, very well written...keep on posting |
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Re: Cry not
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:42:39 PM AEST
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| excellent write. short and to the point but still full of power. written well and presented well. keep up the great work. |
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Re: Cry not
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:50:39 PM AEST
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wow, this is beautiful...
+X+i have to do it i dont want to stay+X+ |
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