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What We Couldn't Do Alone
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:23:18 PM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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I met you one day at camp
We stayed distant for a month
I spilled my story
You spilled yours.
On that day
You taught me
To look beyond what I first saw
To peel away the many masks
And look at the wonders beneath.
Ive gone through many things with you
Pain, both physical and emotional.
But every time
With your help
I have pulled through.
Through everything your by my side.
Be it bad or good
Easy or hard
With you I can accomplish anything
But if you were to leave
I would dither into nothing.
My accomplishments would fade to dust
My hopes and dreams to smithereens.
For without you
I am nothing
Just a faded shadow
In a deep back background.
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Live2Die
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2004-11-29 21:23:18]
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Re: What We Couldn't Do Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:33:05 PM AEST
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What does she think of it?
This is plainspoken
but still interesting,
giving us a look at something
personal,
and not babbling on endlessly
and needlessly.
Nice job. |
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