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Take It Back
Contributed by
unpredictable
on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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I hate pain
I don't see what is to gain
from all the throbbing I feel
will anything come out of it real
jeeze
don't you see the suffering unbearable
torture so taunting and unpredicable
get rid of it take it away
I don't want any hurt today
I dont want this pain you send me
take it back, please if you will
it messes with my heart you see
and I can't get rid of it, nothing works, not even a pill
I'm wrapping it up
for you to inhale
right back to you I am sending
it is coming through the mail
no return address
you won't find it if you look
because I've had a change of address
it is not in any book
Copyright ©
unpredictable
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2002-11-24 10:00:00]
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Re: Take It Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 10:22:57 AM AEST
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This is such a good write
I like the way you did the end
of this poem, It would be nice
if we all could do that. Thanks
for sharing this one i enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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