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I believe you
Contributed by
my_pain_my_sorrows
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:36:05 AM in AEST
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When things are kept deep,
And lies come from your way,
I want to weep,
From day to day.
I'm scared my dream,
That I and you live in,
Will tare at the seam,
And i'll wake to nothing.
You wouldnt hurt me,
I know you've said,
But can't you see?
Your hurting US instead.
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Re: I believe you
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:23:35 AM AEST
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A beautiful write, spoken true, and with feelings of love and sadness mixed in...hope fully the confict within will resolve into continued love...I have seen to much hurt and wish for relationships to be forever...I so wish for yours to be the same....find a way to resolve the problem....so you may never experience the heartbreak.
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