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Innocent Tears (A song or Rap)
Contributed by
Vampyre_BloodWraith
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:15:47 AM in AEST
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Innocent Tears (Rap)
Deep inside burns my heart,
Flames lick the walls hungrily,
Turmoil swims in hatred,
Anger storms unchecked,
(Chorus)
I am hurting inside my mind,
Bleeding unfettered tears,
There is blood on my hands,
Stains from the past and now,
Mine yours hers all real,
Dont touch me leave me be,
You have carved your design,
You made me now I am you,
Does it hurt? Now you know,
I bled for you, deep dark and red,
Now its you turn to feel what I felt,
(Chorus)
I am hurting inside my mind,
Bleeding unfettered tears,
There is blood on my hands,
Stains from the past and now,
Mine yours hers all real,
It hurts doesnt it dont beg,
I begged you but you hurt me more,
What you dont like what you see?
The fires burn and my hatred bleeds,
Gave me nothing but took it all,
You took my innocence,
(Chorus)
I am hurting inside my mind,
Bleeding unfettered tears,
There is blood on my hands,
Stains from the past and now,
Mine yours hers all real,
Why did you make me?
Then show me agony,
Why did you open me up?
I trusted you both,
Why did you not help?
You just watched him,
(Chorus)
I am hurting inside my mind,
Bleeding unfettered tears,
There is blood on my hands,
Stains from the past and now,
Mine yours hers all real,
You created me in love,
And twisted me in sickness,
With smiles you raped me
Bled my innocence in pain,
Well no more! It is your turn,
Feel what I felt when you killed me.
By Vampyre_BloodWraith
Copyright ©
Vampyre_BloodWraith
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2004-11-30 07:15:47]
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Re: Innocent Tears (A song or Rap)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 03:07:29 AM AEST
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....
Wow. Just wow.
This was...awesome.
Very very powerful, it moved me greatly (which is really something these days).
A spectacularly dark song marvelously composed.
I totaly loved it.
Hope to read more of your work soon....
_.:'~Kate~':._
(will be waiting past the point of eagerly..) |
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Re: Innocent Tears (A song or Rap)
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:49:09 PM AEST
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wow is right.
all i can say is this write is awsome . |
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