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shadows
Contributed by
Deathly_Rose
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:31:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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White lies and black hearts,
is all that I know,
feelings of hatred, knowledge of life is all that show.
Blackness consumes me, taking over my body, my mind,
Never knowing just what I may do next.
Harming myself, harming others,
is all that I have learned.
Hatred consuming my heart,
shadowing the life I once lived.
Happiness is a thing in the past, something I do not feel,
moments of hardened times shadowing my sight.
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Deathly_Rose
... [
2004-11-30 08:31:07]
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Re: shadows
(User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:56:48 AM AEST
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NOOOO!!!
BE HAPPY YOUR MY BEST FRIEND!!!!
OI MAKE YOU HAPPY YOU MAKE ME HAPPY, IF YOUR NOT HAPPY I'M NOT HAPPY!!!!
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!
DON'T BE SAD!
*muah*
*~givingin~* |
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Re: shadows
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:57:56 AM AEST
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by the way, good write
*~givingin~* |
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Re: shadows
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:48:52 AM AEST
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| another good write..keep it up hun |
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