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Outcast
Contributed by
MasterWeasel
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:49:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Inside me rage and hatred burns
Friend from foe I can't discern
The people whom I've pushed away
My only wish is one would stay
Just to let myself be heard
Yet no one listens to a word
Always I will be alone
My troubles no man could atone
And as I sit here in such pain
I wonder what still keeps me sane
When I realize no one will help
I begin to despise and hate myself
Always picked on kicked and shoved
I only wanted to be loved
Just to feel I had a place
Yet hostility is all I've faced
It's all my fault and I'm to blame
Because you and I are not the same
I can't be helped for now I see
There simply is no peace for me
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MasterWeasel
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2004-11-30 08:49:56]
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Re: Outcast
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:47:47 AM AEST
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So full of pain and anguish. Isn't this a place most poets pass through? Some stay longer than others...some maybe their whole lives.
You are a dependable poet, that is for sure.
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Re: Outcast
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:14:21 PM AEST
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Such emotions ... is this what you are actually feeling ? because if it is i hope you overcome this and move on to be a better person ... it is hard to find a place where you arent the outcast .. but there is one for everybody !!
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Re: Outcast
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:02:40 AM AEST
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Wow. Is this what your truly feeling? In all your poems? I hope not...because they express such...sad feelings. if you are there are always people here to talk =). I used to feel the way this poem describes...so I can relate. I used to mentally beat myself up because I thought since I didn't fit in at school there was something wrong with me...and that it must be all my fault. I learned differently however. I went to a summer camp (silly as it may seem....this is an amazing camp for people who don't fit in at skool) and learned that I can be ME. And that people will love me for ME....and they do. If you read my poems, look at who the dedicated ones are for...those are the main people who have helped me thru. (cough2ndchancecoughcough) Anyway, if you truly feel this way, then know that just open up, and be yourself....and you will have friends. But you have to trust in yourself...and not hate you. =)
Stay Strong
~ Marissa~ |
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Re: Outcast
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by pixie on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:25:13 AM AEST
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a emotion filled write, I have often felt like an outcast throughout my life *hugs* a pained and struggling write,
pixie xx |
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