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the night that began the end of my life
Contributed by
imalive_enoughsaid
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:23:21 AM in AEST
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you layed me down so softly
you whispered words so dear
you took away all my worrys
and you took away all my fears
your hands wandered to places
no hands had been before
your hard and sculpted body
made my heart just drop to the floor
you felt me shaking and trembling
you said it would be ok
the way i was feeling inside right then
put my body into a dismay
the candles were lit
and the music was playing
"i love you" "i love you" ,
you kept saying and saying
your words so belivable
so honest and true
but know its inconveiveable
of how i ever trusted you
was it really worth my while
to lose myself that night
the night you gentley smiled
and quickly destroyed my life.
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Re: the night that began the end of my life
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:46:18 AM AEST
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sorry for your pain , this was a very sad write, powerful
pixie xx |
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