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Big Brother
Contributed by
sunnygal
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 12:03:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Brother's love wears a disquise,
As a child it's hard to reconize,
He picked on me until I"d cry,
I did"nt pretend to know why,
He tried to tell me what to do,
Now i know he was protecting me too,
He was always watching out for me,
I got mad because i did not see,
My Big brother loved me so,
And I"ll take that love everywhere i go.
Copyright ©
sunnygal
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2004-11-30 12:03:02]
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Re: Big Brother
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by dtborchert on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:41:11 AM AEST
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| Very sweet. Nice job. |
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Re: Big Brother
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by Kandy on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:40:50 PM AEST
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I have A bigger brother and BOY IS HE A PAIN.
But I get what you mean liked it.Kandy |
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Re: Big Brother
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:32:11 PM AEST
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I have two older sisters, but I think the same thing applies.
Good write
Steve |
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