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Diet
Contributed by
ladyaryssa
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Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 02:18:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Diet
I live on tins and sandwiches
And things in plastic wrappers
Because nothing better seems to be on offer.
5 fruit and veg a day
8 glasses of water
We can control how we live but not how we eat
No.
Stop.
Reverse that.
Malnutrition muddles me
I don't get enough
excitement
happiness
comfort
or vitamin A.
Just carbohydrate, fat and boredom
Slowing me into a lethargy.
No wonder I'm overweight.
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Re: Diet
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:01:41 PM AEST
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i know how tyou feel, a very good write, a diffrent subject, I liked it,
pixie xx |
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Re: Diet
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by ladyaryssa on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:10:25 PM AEST
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| In case anyone doesn't click (how many people do, first time they read a poem?), this is an extended metapor. I'm not literally overweight. It's about symbolism and stuff. |
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Re: Diet
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:00:38 PM AEST
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| Good poem. A nice change from what I'm used to reading. |
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