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Will We Ever?
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:29:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In a world where
Each mystery solved
Produces three more
Will we ever
Solve the mystery of life?
In a video game where
Each level beaten
Produces three more
Will we ever
Beat this game?
In a maze where
Each path followed
Produces three more
Will we ever
Find a way out?
In a story where
Each truth
Produces three lies
Will we ever
Discover the true tale?
And if we do
Solve the mystery
Beat the game
Find a way out
Discover the truth
Will we be in
Heaven or Hell
And how will we know?
Copyright ©
Live2Die
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2004-11-30 17:29:27]
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Re: Will We Ever?
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by daydreamer22 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:48:36 PM AEST
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wow...that is osm...its so tru 2!...haha...good job
Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~ |
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Re: Will We Ever?
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:30:05 PM AEST
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Great poem.
You kept introducing new ideas
to ponder but maintained the
sole question.
Without being boring
and redundant.
--Mothy |
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Re: Will We Ever?
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by MasterWeasel on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:25:16 AM AEST
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| Well, this type of writing is not my cup of tea to be honest...I'm more into bound verse; that is my style. I have no say in this peice, really...but it seems to me that you are honestly trying to express yourself and that's all you need |
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